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Rising of The Dead
Contributed by
kingdom-of-hateness
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:52:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When the moon is round and darkness surrounds
Havoc tides raising the sea
First hands come out and then the rest
I view the fettered freed
Graves tear and out come coffins
Sinister faced creatures arise
Glaring around lost and estranged
This world where exist demise
Feasting on blood and flesh
A slogan solemnly arises
Accompanied by their Lord Satan
Evil speaks
WE ARE IMMORTAL !
wE ARE ETERNAL !
And the hell ends as Satan speaks
Bless you! Bless you! Bless you
Staring around and cursing the world
Evil speaks
The Dead shall rise Again !
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Re: Rising of The Dead
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:57:01 AM AEST
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lol nicely done, I could just see this as if it was a scene to a film.
Take Care
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Re: Rising of The Dead
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:58:25 AM AEST
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Oooh, me likes. Especially the first stanza. I think it is powerful.
This is really good. You seem to be a good dark writer.
Can't wait to see more,
Welcome to YPDC,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Rising of The Dead
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by AKA_Anonymous on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:17:09 AM AEST
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| Wow. That was a very interesting write, but wonderful none the less. XD |
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