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THE MOMENT THAT WE PART
Contributed by
jeannoh
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:33:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The Moment That We part
There Are Many Things On My Mind As Of Late
But I Just Don't Want It To Turn Into A Debate
The Right From The Wrong
It's My Point Of View
Nothing I Say Seems Will Ever Please You.
You Say You Need A Change
In Your Life To Be Happy'
But All That You Tell Me
Is Your Life Is Just So Lacking
So Tell Me Love What You Want Me To Do
I Will Give It My All
In The Hope Of Pleasing You.
Still The Things Already Done
That I Hear From Your Lips
Seems There Is Still So Much That Wrong
Must Be Something I Have Missed
I Know That Things Have Changed
From The First Time We Both Met
But Each Day I Waken
And I Just Want To Forget
All The Pain And The Anger
We've Caused For Each Other
I Still Want You Only
To Be My Dear Sweet Lover
So What Do I Have Left
Now You Tell Me You Must Leave
An Ache In My Heart
And A Yearning For My Soul To Grieve
You See I Still Do Love You
With My Entire Being
And The Feeling Is Empty With
These Cards That You Keep Dealing
So Please Don't Leave With Sadness
And Such A Sorry Look Upon Your Face
I Am Sorry For All The Things
I Just Could Not Find A Way To Erase
But What Has Happened
Is Over And Here We Both Stand
What Else Can I Say To Make
Me More Of A Man
So If You Must Go
I Won't Stand In Your Way
I Have Given My All
And There Is Nothing Left To Say
Except I Will Always Love You.
You Have Taken My Heart
And I'll Try Not To Cry
At The Moment When We Part.
Written By Jean Marie Boudreau
Copyright ©
jeannoh
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2005-02-17 08:33:34]
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Re: THE MOMENT THAT WE PART
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:44:04 AM AEST
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Wow, that's really good.
You really captured how you feel well.
One thing though, I suggest not putting all the words in capitals, I find it makes a poem look messy, but that is just my opinion.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: THE MOMENT THAT WE PART
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:50:33 AM AEST
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Beautiful and sad at the same time. Such sweet words for a sorrowful subject. I hope everything works out in the end.
Take Care
- Becca |
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