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8 words
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:43:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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From the beginning we made a vow
Promising our friendship into an abyss
Saying it could never end
Out of our 3 years together
It took ten minutes for everything to fall apart
8 words from my mouth and that was it
Nothing will be the same again
Now with a shattered heart and a broken dream
We go our own ways, knowing this is the end of happiness
8 words from my mouth and that was it
I find myself now regretting every moment I had of us
The thought alone brings my heart to a complete stop
Love is something I never wanted
But I took that chance and I failed
Because of 8 words from my mouth
And that was it
8 words….”I am Sorry, I was wrong about us”
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2005-02-16 23:43:27]
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Re: 8 words
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:52:54 PM AEST
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| i know how that goes...it hurts a lot and all you can really do is try and move on...this was a good poem, I liked reading it, though it was sad |
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Re: 8 words
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by jmakuer on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 12:34:57 AM AEST
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| SAD BUT GOOD THOUGH....YEAH WORDS SOMETIMES COULD MAKE YOUR BREATH DISAPEAR...IT IS HARD TO KEEP YOURSELF DOWN.BUT ALWAYS GOOD TO THINK IT OVER BEFORE YOU SAY IT..GOOD HOPEFULY YOU WILL GET HIM BACK..OR SHOW HIM THIS AND SEE HOW HE FEELS.. |
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