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Blind Eyes
Contributed by
Pollo_Picante1120
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:19:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Legitimacy hidden beneath false love.
Something you should be sick of.
Take a stand and arise,
Blind Eyes
A constant lie reborn,
All that’s left, to whine and warn.
You should listen and become wise,
Blind Eyes
Leaving everyone in disgust,
Driven by heartache and lust.
She’s hidden by a selfish disguise,
Blind Eyes
Trust and loyalty concealed by a mask,
Chip and tear, reveal and bask.
Unravel the ties and see lies
Blind Eyes
The moment to draw the line,
Tell her it’s over and resign.
Leave her as she sits and cries,
Blind Eyes
See I still am a truthful friend.
Time for hearts to rebuild and mend.
See color and no longer surmise,
Brown eyes.
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Pollo_Picante1120
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2005-02-16 22:19:44]
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Re: Blind Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:47:04 PM AEST
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| this was pretty cool, i liked it...it seemed to flow pretty well :) |
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Re: Blind Eyes
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by Taurusgem1 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:59:51 PM AEST
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| Good word content but it should paint a picture. You should read some award winning poetry.. You will see how the words make you see and feel something.. I like it but I think it needs more work. |
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