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Untitled
Contributed by
Ash
on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alive forever
Life without death
No need for air
Never out of breath
Cold of the body
Absence of soul
Subject to envy
I never grow old
I'm ever young
Pain is my pleasure
Canny and highstrung
Torture at leisure
I worship the night
Blood sustains me
Burning pain in the light
Unearthly Beauty
Sleep in my coffin
Soul is afire
Spawn of satan
The immortal vampire
Copyright ©
Ash
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2002-12-12 20:20:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 09:02:49 PM AEST
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Wow, I thought this was very well written. I don't get the line canny and highstrung though. I'd love to see the poems you are happy with!
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Re: Untitled
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 04:05:22 PM AEST
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| this is so good...i have written a poem so much like this, i was shocked when i read it...i love it... |
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