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if i had one wish
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:54:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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if i had one wish
i wonder...wat would i wish for
...to be happy
...to be loved
...nope...
if i had one wish
i would wish and wish and wish
with all my heart and soul
to be gone
i wanna go
never to be seen again
never for you to lie to
never to be hurt again
if i went
nobody would notice
or care
about my absence
you ppl tell me to go
that they dont care
to just die
im nothing
if im nothing now
i wonder wat id be wen i die
would you pretend to care
come to my funeral
and cry fake tears
tell my family sorry
wen your really glad
well dont
save your tears
save your "sadness"
bc i dont care
i hate you
dont bother wen im gone
bye.
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Re: if i had one wish
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:05:07 PM AEST
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Good poem
Um you should check your spelling a little better though..But overall you did a great job on the poem
Looking forward to your next write =]
Clark
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don't beg for comments... Please =] |
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Re: if i had one wish
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by Petznick on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:59:38 PM AEST
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really , really good. it conveys alot of emotion i enjoyed it very much
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Re: if i had one wish
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by JasTrask_22 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:26:47 PM AEST
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WOw.. thats totally what i think about.. like when i die, who will come to my funeral..
awesome write
i enjoyed it !
LATER DAYZ
!Jasmine! |
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