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You Led Me To My Past

Contributed by Breezy1125 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:19:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



i let you know my everything
my where-abouts and how i feel
i let you see what was locked inside
from the rain, your voice was my shield
i let you touch me
each time real gentle and soft
i let you hold my heart in your hand
unaware in the end that i would be paying a cost
i let you talk to me
you told me any and everything you felt was right
i let you call me on my cell phone past my curfew
and we talked use'n my minutes-weekends and nights
i let you into my room
you saw tha loud and surprising side of me
i let you hold my book
you read my writings and quotes that set me free
i let you hold my hand
and guide me to my destination
i let you into my life
to help ease any past, future, or present mis-communication
i let you whisper in my ear
all those things that made me smile and cry
i let you pull me close to you
when all you was doin was draggin me deeper into your lies
i let you caress my mind
with my heart doubting you were real...
i let you unlock what was closed behind a steel door...
all these feelings and emotions that i needed myself to heal...
i let you know too much
but my ears grew to love you too soon
i let you lead me back to that state..
wen dem nights started shadowing pictures of blue moons...

~Breezy-B~




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Re: You Led Me To My Past (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:38:53 PM AEST
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this reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago.."My heart is a feather in your hand".. it got blown away.. nice write...


Re: You Led Me To My Past (User Rating: 1 )
by zaknafein8891 on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:13:57 AM AEST
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Wow, I would be lying if I didn't say this is one of the best poems I have read on this site. Its so creative the way you put no capital letters and no periods. I think you have the potential to be great.
Thanks for your post on my poem "Hole in the Mirror".
stay strong, and keep writing.

Zak




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