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All in a Dream
Contributed by
eden
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:56:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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All in a dream you take my hand
The only world that matters now
All in a dream you brush against me
The only way that matters now
You love me, you hold me,
Can’t live without me
But I see that when my eyes open you’re gone.
Smashing through reality
Getting a grip on life
The real world is overrated
I like my dreams just fine
And when it seems like I'm waking up
I squeeze my eyes tighter
Because that dream world
Is where I keep you
Come out, come out, my love.
Copyright ©
eden
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2005-02-16 20:56:15]
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Re: All in a Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:09:13 PM AEST
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Lovely write. I can identify with it...
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Re: All in a Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:46:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I hope that you find your love in reality as well as behind closed eyes. Well written.
Take Care
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Re: All in a Dream
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:42:10 PM AEST
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| reminds me of awhile back..when I just wanted to live in my dream world and never wake up.. keep dreaming that same dream..cause it was soooo nice. Enjoyed your write. |
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Re: All in a Dream
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:38:00 PM AEST
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wow this is amazin lish*dances* wow yay! now i get 2 comment on my best friends poems 2 *dances more* this is reely good, even tho it didnt rhyme it was absolutely amazing!
Jenni xxoo |
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