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Lustful Expectation
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:39:21 PM in AEST
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Lustful Expectation
Expectation limits inspiration
Bleeding contracts the veins
The ink dries in paged fixation
With blood drops of pain
The lustful bleeding heart
Beating with rhythmical hate
Slowly decaying apart
With the valves' blood left to decimate
Blood droplets of dew
Start to fall and settle
On the blackened hue
Of withered petals
Icy blood drops fall down
Staining the page without a sound
As the pen hits the ground
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2005-02-16 20:39:21]
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Re: Lustful Expectation
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:25:44 PM AEST
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If I am Understanding this right Jennifer...Then It is very true for most people here...If not then I totally missed the picture
Great write Jen
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Re: Lustful Expectation
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:08:17 AM AEST
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Jen you do have a wonderfull way of writing poetry, this was just brilliant & creative.
Great poem, thanks for posting.
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Re: Lustful Expectation
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 01:55:18 AM AEST
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Powerful piece.
"Expectation limits inspiration"
That's a very interesting statement...I've never thought of it before, but you're absolutely right. |
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