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sorry
Contributed by
bebe20071
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:08:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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My dearest friend
thanks for being there for me till the end
you always told me to try
whenever i give up and cry
you always told me what's right
eventhought that always started a fight
you always wiped my tears
and comforted my fears
you did so many things for me
and help me be relieved and free
but i am not doing my job as a friend
i'm making it very hard and i'm afriad it may end
i was trying to impress other
and forget that i would hurt the feeling for another
i never thought i would hurt your feeling
and now i am hear to helped it healing
will you ever forgive me
for being carefree
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2005-02-16 20:08:18]
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Re: sorry
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:25:08 PM AEST
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I think this is really good... one thing is for sure. it is a really neat way of saying sorry.
GOOD JOB.
god bless
*BEBE ( if you need to talk, my aim is BEBE_queen15)* |
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Re: sorry
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by Taurusgem1 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:27:52 PM AEST
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| Clean up the spelling errors and you got a good apology poem. |
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Re: sorry
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:57:42 PM AEST
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aw, this was very sweet, I hope your friend forgives you. I agree that you need to fix spelling errors, just run it through spell check and it'll be great.
GoodLuck,
Amanda |
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Re: sorry
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:57:58 PM AEST
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aw, this was very sweet, I hope your friend forgives you. I agree that you need to fix spelling errors, just run it through spell check and it'll be great.
GoodLuck,
Amanda |
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