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An unsettlement

Contributed by LevyMetal on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:21:24 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'd risk shallow, fine lines to feel at peace
Tired and worried but almost grazed the finish line
Grounds shook beneath and emerged greedful leeches
I could of sworn those swords were driven by men in red.

In a cage of sweltered fears
I feel the need to breath deeper
I had a pacifer when times got unbareable
Men in white ripped away all i had once been given

Whats this riot really about in the quickness of a fight?
My daughters throat has given in from screaming of truce
I feel my head getting heavy and sink into this sadness
Im certain these men had bloodshot eyes of blue.

In a mourning of death we cry, we raid
This horrid nation is terribly absurd i say!
Quite organized, but really lost its humble nature
Humans hurting humans and now im as angry as them.

Copyright © LevyMetal ... [ 2005-02-16 18:21:24]
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Re: An unsettlement (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:26:32 PM AEST
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The first stanza was the best in my opinion.....very unique and poetic.

I'd risk shallow, fine lines to feel at peace
Tired and worried but almost grazed the finish line
Grounds shook beneath and emerged greedful leeches
I could have sworn those swords were driven by men in red.

"I'd rist shallow, fine lines to feel at peace"-----wow, I would love to have written this line.

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