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I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E
Contributed by
gina
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Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
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Lightning,thunder,crazy storm
Freezing air but you keep me warm
I turn to you each and every night
or maybe in the day to be out of sight
Relief,comfort,peace you offer
A world of dreams sweet or bitter
The last thing that see my eyes
Watching me as my body lies
No pain can touch me,no wound no harm
As you hold me tight i'm in safe arms
Sometimes I reach the edge and fall
But always come back as I hear you call
Just the two of us,or should i say one
Together we stay till rise the sun
Forced to leave,wish more i could stay
There you remain waiting me all day
Promise i'll return as soon as i can
To find this pleasure again and again
Aways this thought crosses my head
What would i do if i didn't have a BED
Copyright ©
gina
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2002-12-12 19:40:00]
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Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 09:52:28 PM AEST
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| This poem is definitelya masterpiece of yours. Good job Gina! |
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Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 10:23:32 PM AEST
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Great write!!! You had me there Gina... :>)
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Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 12:02:20 AM AEST
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Haha! You gots me!! I thought it was a guy you weres talking about, but it was a bed!
Yay for the beds! They finally gots a poem!!
It's awesome...
YS |
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Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E
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by OreO on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 11:19:11 AM AEST
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Oh lol....i thought the same thing...i thought this was talkin about a man to LOL sheesh...this was a good write i enjoyed it alot thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E
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by Opium on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 08:12:07 AM AEST
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| It doesn't matter if it was a man or a bed you know, what matters is that they get to hold you all night long and makes you feel safe and wander throu your head, while there are others in another corner of their own beds thinking about you :P |
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Re: I-N-D-I-S-P-E-N-S-A-B-L-E
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by spooky on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 07:00:34 AM AEST
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| beautifully written ,,,with heart,,,great message,,,it does make a person think |
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