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You are Missed
Contributed by
Hakiokusaken
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:20:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I won't give up on you till im dead
while im here, I'll leave nothing unsaid
I've kept it all bottled up inside
now I'll sit back and enjoy the ride
in the past I got treated like ****
but I just sat there and ignored it
the things I went through made me stronger
and for my pops, I can live longer
Last time I saw him I was 7
but the next time will be in heaven
I miss you dad, and I'll make you proud
I can see your face up on that cloud
and when we meet we'll dance in the snow
then I'll hug you and never let go
so now, to the sky, I blow a kiss
that's to let you know, that you are missed
Copyright ©
Hakiokusaken
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2005-02-16 17:20:13]
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Re: You are Missed
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:49:00 PM AEST
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| Very touching. Good write, thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: You are Missed
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by Gunda on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:44:49 PM AEST
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You are able to reach deep in side my soul with this poem. A really good write.
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Re: You are Missed
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by catz77 on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 12:11:38 PM AEST
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this is very touching
and a real good poem
keep 'em comin
catz |
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Re: You are Missed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:02:54 AM AEST
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| A very lovely and heartfelt tribute. Great job. |
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