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Drop a Dreaded Suicide
Contributed by
waos
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:52:39 PM in AEST
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A gift of words
defamed beneath this shame
- want to say goodbye -
drop a dreaded
- suicide -
What a waste of all our time.
Hold me till the pain subsides.
Paper's a weak comfort
that fuels desire.
- hold me please -
- just until the pain fades -
- just for a moment -
Drop a dreaded
- suicide -
desire.
Copyright ©
waos
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2005-02-16 16:52:39]
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Re: Drop a Dreaded Suicide
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by craz2 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:56:27 PM AEST
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| sometimes this is al that it seems to take. pain is all to consuming sometimes. i want to go away like this. a |
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Re: Drop a Dreaded Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:33:04 PM AEST
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| very well done, kara. interesting piece, very original. |
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Re: Drop a Dreaded Suicide
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:48:25 PM AEST
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beautifully written Kara and if I could hold you
til the pain subsided I would, but its kind of
hard you living two time zones away and all.
I hope writing this enabled you to shed some
of the pain you were feeling.
Bobo (Joel) |
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