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SHE STANDS ALONE
Contributed by
bibi
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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SHE STANDS ALONE AMIDST THE CROWD
TO KNOW HER IS JUST NOT ALLOWED
WHO IS THIS BEAUTY OH SO FAIR
WITH DARK BROWN EYES AND BLACKEST HAIR
THAT CAPTIVATES ME WITH HER SMILE
KEEPS ME WONDERING ALL THE WHILE
WHO IS THIS ONE MY EYES DO SEEK
THAT MAKES ME STUUTER WHEN WE SPEAK
THIS LADY FAIR THAT LEAVES ME MUTE
WITH NOT A THOUGHT NOR EVEN CLUE
NO WORDS I FIND DO JUST EXPRESS
FRUSTRATIONS TAKE THE PLACE OF STRESS
AND ALL THE THINGS I WISH TO SAY
LOSE THEIR VOICE ALONG THE WAY
NO MATTER WHAT NOR HOW I TRY
I CANNOT FIND THE REASON WHY
SHE STANDS ALONE AMIDST THE CROWD
TO KNOW HER IS JUST NOT ALLOWED
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2005-02-16 16:36:56]
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Re: SHE STANDS ALONE
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:39:11 PM AEST
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aww thats sweet. I don't want to correct anything though, I'm not that great of a writer, but I'm sure she'll appreciate it, that's very cute.
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Re: SHE STANDS ALONE
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:45:04 PM AEST
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its lovely lose the cap locks though they are a bit distracting other than that nicely done she will love it!
Michelle |
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Re: SHE STANDS ALONE
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by craz2 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:53:12 PM AEST
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| give it to her before she walks away. there needs to be more poems out there like this. a |
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Re: SHE STANDS ALONE
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by Daniels_Princess on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:02:43 PM AEST
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| Thats beautiful..and like craz2 said, there do need to be more poems like this..she'll love it. Its very sweet |
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