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Pledging
Contributed by
b_rand
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:19:59 PM in AEST
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and so it begins - the debt for my sins
little ive paid for this life that im in
i was born without warnin to cute rich and thin
and now i must suffer, must give up my grin
i wrote my name down on the dotted black line
i signed up for hell to be awarded in time
is it really as good as i see with my eyes?
i wont know until its all over / behind
and once that time comes, its already too late
my heart may be filled with regret and with hate
i'll be stuck with these "brothers" who call themselves great
and if im unable to handle, my mind just might break
but the girls and the parties and slavery thats promised
i'm not able to turn down for just a little vomit
rushes and pledges and extras piled on it
i guess i gotta give up a year to be honest
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Re: Pledging
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by noone on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:31:05 PM AEST
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This is a great write. Well done. You have talent, please post more,
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Re: Pledging
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:22:11 AM AEST
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| very cool write! well put together with rhyme and meaning! dw |
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