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Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
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I'm sorry Brandon I can't get you that toy,
for Daddys work is slow,
you'll understand, my oldest boy,
It's what you wanted,I know,
Justins too little to understand,
why theres no gifts under the tree,
some I made some with my own hand,
they are the special gifts from me,
we will really try to do our best,
but please don't get mad,
we promise we'll get you the rest,
but this is all we had,
I know what other kids got,
but it's hard for us to buy,
but these are the gifts that we bought,
I know you'll ask why?
Mommy is there a Santa Clause?
Did he forget to come here?
We were good,I know I was,
did you hear his reindeer?
wheres the gift I asked him for,
It was'nt too big for his sack,
maybe you put the lock on the door,
so maybe he'll be back,
Holding back the tears I had,
when he looked at his dad and me,
maybe Santa thought we were bad,
thats why it's bare under the tree,
Justins does'nt know why Brandon cries,
he's still happy any way,
not understanding the guestion WHYS,
Why did'nt Santa come today?!
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LOWMAN613
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2002-12-12 18:40:00]
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by spooky on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 08:18:36 PM AEST
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I remember me and my brothers asked the same thing, and it still brings tears to my eyes , as if you knew my family
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by spooky on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 08:18:38 PM AEST
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I remember me and my brothers asked the same thing, and it still brings tears to my eyes , as if you knew my family
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by Vigilante006 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 08:56:24 PM AEST
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| dang, that's really touching, hope things improve for you soon. God bless. |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 09:28:17 PM AEST
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Christina, this is a touching write. I hope Brandon understands...I know he will have a great Christmas with all the love that he gets.....
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 10:18:42 PM AEST
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| Thanx everyone! The title didnt show up for some reason it was called "Mommy is there A Santa Clause?"Christina |
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by OreO on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 09:03:32 AM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes so bad...ahhh i can't stand this.. your poems some of them are sooo deep they make me cry real hard..i can clearly say that with the love you have for your family and for your children that they will see that your love is the best gift they ever could have received...it doesn't break, tarnish, corrode, or leave them ever...thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry Christina i enjoy reading your work always...
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by Smooth on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 05:01:30 PM AEST
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Sometimes we forget what Christmas is really about, we get so caught up in the commercialism of it all. I can read through your words that you are a wonderful mother and that you will pass that love and hope and joy for your family onto your children. They are so lucky to have you for a mother, sometimes our gifts come later. The gift of love and family you pass on today to your children will be the same that they pass on to theirs, and that love and respect will come back to you tenfold. I loved reading this as I have enjoyed others from you as well. It's parents like you that make america great, thank you for that.
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 06:03:53 PM AEST
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| This was totally amazin,very beuatiful.Im sure ur kids will be fine this christmas epsically with a great mom like u.Great write. |
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