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twisted
Contributed by
karmen
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:53:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A black tear falls,
joining the river on her face.
Nightmares are coming true,
everyone looks in disgrace.
Blood runs red,
all through the streets.
Face to face with true fright,
everyone meets.
The town is going insane,
the ground starts to crumble.
Hell is taking over,
no longer is anyone humble.
Time stands still,
yet no one stops.
Up from the ground,
hell pops.
People are falling through the cracks,
and being pushed off the cliffs.
From good to evil,
everything shifts.
Things are so twisted.
You start to scream,
then someone awakes you,
and says “It was just a dream”.
Copyright ©
karmen
... [
2005-02-16 12:53:20]
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Re: twisted
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:41:23 PM AEST
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Well written and insightful. It flows nicely... thanks for sharing.
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Re: twisted
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by bethie on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:52:17 PM AEST
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sounds more like a nightmare than a dream. or even a bad dream. It is a fairly good description of
a hellish world. |
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Re: twisted
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:57:42 PM AEST
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that was really good, i sure liked that, ive had a dream like that, and ive written a poem just like it, i dont know if ive put it on this website but if you go to
www.anylit.com
you may find it
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