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dream away
Contributed by
shattereddaydreams
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:42:11 AM in AEST
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my heart speed up
my stomach churns
lose of breath
my face starts to burn
I start to shake
at the first look
at hello
you were hooked
a deadly addiction
a repeating song
always to short
no such thing as too long
breath taking smile
complete captivation
saying goodbye
absolute devastation
deep brown eyes
one glance makes you melt
unbelievable feelings
you didnt know could be felt
wishes for tomorrow
hopes for today
could spend the rest of my life
dreaming away
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Re: dream away
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:08:42 AM AEST
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Oooh, good write,
It captured me straight away, and I just had to keep reading.
I can relate to this so much, as I am also going through something to similar to this.
It's complicated..
Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: dream away
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:30:02 AM AEST
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Yep, it is EXACTLY like that.
Stitch |
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Re: dream away
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by CoLD on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:29:27 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem! I like it cuz I can relate to it also, even the deep brown eyes part. I hate complications |
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