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Auto Show
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:06:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Auto Show
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I couldn’t have been more proud
Walking you down the aisle
As all the onlookers
Saw your amazing smile
In your little blue jeans
And striped sweater
You held my hand
As we walked together
A look of interest
Outlined your face
As cars were lined
All over the place
From one to another
We took our turn
As desire in our hearts
Started to burn
My favorite was a pick-up
Yours a car
Mommies, a minivan
Similar to ours
What a day at the show
We had such a fun time
A day in dreamland
Suited us just fine
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-02-16 08:06:40]
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Re: Auto Show
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:11:22 AM AEST
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Awww, this is so nice.
Family days are the best.
The first part of the poem, sounded almost like it was a wedding though. lol.
A lovely, cute, poem.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: Auto Show
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:36:35 AM AEST
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I think I'm reliving my children being young through your poetry. With us, however, it was the boat show.
Stitch |
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Re: Auto Show
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by Leslie on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 11:05:56 PM AEST
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| Very nice. I really enjoyed it. |
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