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The proposal

Contributed by SPOKENWORDARTIST on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 03:40:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You have become the design of my dreams in person and I have my whole life to appreciate the gift given to me from you.

I close my eyes and trace the outline of your beauty with my mind finger tips and tremble nervously and the details I see so clearly.

It overwhelms my senses with thoughts of loving you so deep with passion that Grand Canyon seems small in the distance of romance.

Your almond butter brandy skin tone and curves of Pepsi are so intoxicating that I stumble mumble speechless whispers of how lucky i am to have met you.

For the secrets of the heart are fragile and must be Nourished with silent touches of compliments and appreciation and a simple I love you when understanding is not enough...

Shall this awareness give the insight to master your body with great precision and accuracy and feed your emotional needs like my life depends on it?

For you’re the air I breath and the sound of my heartbeat as it flutter while missing you when were apart.

Think not those poison words of you to good to be true because of unhealed scares across you crimson valentine when mistrust has ruptured it so.

For myself your honey silk velvet smile contains a truth serum my heart cant deny and you eyes read me like you favorite book for I cant hide behind wall of protection that have no use.

I search not the archives of my memory for past heartache for with you, I begin a new On one knee for the entire world to see held here in my hand this dust of coal sparkling bright I invite you to combine souls on that special day when we both say I do.

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Re: The proposal (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:15:50 AM AEST
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Oh, if your best friend is the one you wrote this for ... and she just married someone else ... I'm deeply deeply sorry for you ... your writing is incredibly heartfelt and would melt any woman's heart - I pray you will meet someone who returns your feelings and is the lucky recipient of such beautiful words in the future ... Jan

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