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Black Angel
Contributed by
ESchell
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 02:30:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A soft touch grazes my arm,
turning to look while I feel no harm,
A burst of light enters my soul,
It turns as dark as the night,
And I'm forsted to pay the tole
Our eyes meet but I try not to stare,
I can't stand but to see it's glare,
I get pulled forth,
Forced to dance,
With the Angel,
The Black Angel of Death,
Her eyes still hooked on mine,
As I tremble with fear,
A red tear rolls down,
her face so near
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ESchell
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2005-02-16 02:30:02]
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Re: Black Angel
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:09:37 AM AEST
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ya know theres a black angel somewhere in Iowa...i forget where now...anyway....good job
always, abraham |
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Re: Black Angel
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:13:28 AM AEST
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This is amazing!
It's ironic how our most painful moments can turn into something beautiful.
Great write!
Take Care~ Stellar |
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Re: Black Angel
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:08:42 PM AEST
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it is funny how the black angle was sheding a tear... any way, this was a good poem I kow what its like to look at the approaching end and see all the thigs that you think will save you but in the end is only you who can do that.
I didi like this one I could feel the emotion you put in to this work, but please dont think like that, if you need hel[p just ask us here will always help. be strong and God bless.
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Re: Black Angel
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:40:30 PM AEST
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| never let your talent touch death. |
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Re: Black Angel
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 03:05:27 AM AEST
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A great poem I am glad that you did not
succumb to death because that would've
been a tragedy. I hope you now find life worth
living as I do now. Keep on writing out your
pain instead of botting it up inside.
Bobo (Joel) |
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