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The Cycle of Passion
Contributed by
ESchell
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 02:24:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The pleasing sensation fills my soul,
As I feel the warm thickness stream down my limb,
I did what must be done,
And she had to pay the price,
She’ll burn in hates,
By means of her sin,
By means of her beautiful sin of passion
As I freeze,
Freeze in hell,
Because of my act of God in name of passion,
Her thirst of love,
And your thirst for lust
Makes me loath passion
And the act I have done,
But what’s done is done,
And once more will be done,
In the name of passion
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ESchell
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2005-02-16 02:24:50]
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Re: The Cycle of Passion
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by Taurusgem1 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 03:03:10 AM AEST
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| Why didn't you kill him, it was his fault? |
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Re: The Cycle of Passion
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:39:22 AM AEST
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I like the repetition
"Makes me loath passion"
Really like that line. Killer stuff. (No pun intended)
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Re: The Cycle of Passion
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:25:47 AM AEST
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I agree with Taurusgem...
You should have killed the guy.
He has the most blame. |
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