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You let me fall
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:26:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I just want to cry
Fall to my knees and cry
Scream out your name
Look to the heavens and ask why
I loved you and you loved me
What more did there have to be
You made me fly
You caught me every time I jumped
But you let me fall once
That's all it took
One time I jumped and you let me drop
I walked away limping and heart sick
I was hurt and down
We spoke today
You closed whole in my heart closed
You walked by my side once again
You gave me hope once again
I wish you didn't let me fall
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Re: You let me fall
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:21:15 AM AEST
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this is sad.... dont ya just hate it when ppl drop us on our hear blahhhh
nicely written
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Re: You let me fall
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:36:51 PM AEST
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i tried to catch u,but i over looked the unlookable and feel myself,i'm sorry,i wish u wouldnt think that i let u fall,i wish that i didnt let myself fall.well g2g ttyl xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox, great write, it was nicely well written
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