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The Last Time I Saw You
Contributed by
mbs
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:40:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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It isn't all that very long ago,
I had you here, and both my heart and soul were thrilled -
To have an angel like yourself, love me -
Like you did...
You were one in a million,
No one else could ever compare...
Your beauty was nothing close, to any other beauty,
My eyes had ever seen......
So, we never made it, to forever,
Despite our plans, to be together -
Until the end of time...
And, nights alone in the darkness,
Without somebody to hold.
Are the nights, my mind remembers ,
The way it used to be...
Hand in hand, as we sat in front of the fire,
Walks along the oceans' sandy beaches,
Weekend trips to Montery..
Yeah, it's nights like this, that I can't stop thinking of -
How on earth I let you, ever walk away....
Looking back at it now,
I realize I didn't know, what I was supposed to do.
As you said you were leavin',
I could barely hold the tears back,
No words - No trying to change your mind...
I'd just have to face the facts...
I just stood there, playing it cool!
But, what if I'd tried to stop you?
Was there anything I could have said?
I wish I knew,,,
Did it really have to be - the last time I saw you?
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mbs
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2005-02-15 23:40:07]
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Re: The Last Time I Saw You
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:47:14 PM AEST
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| ABSOLUTELY GREAT POEM. I know that feeling all too well (unfortunately). I love it. Almost welled up tears, but it didn't. Keep it up |
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Re: The Last Time I Saw You
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by Chilibear on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 03:08:01 PM AEST
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Wow, that was so beautiful. i know how you feel. Keep up the good work!
Love always, Chili |
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