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Contributed by
LaDyD
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:12:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why that’s all I want to know
You said you cared but didn’t let it show
When we were together nothing was wrong
The feeling was there and it was so strong
How can you love someone and let them go?
Even if we were together only on the low
You said I was perfect, so why did u leave
I gave you my all, but you just didn’t believe
I tried but I guess that wasn’t enough
I don’t see myself with anyone else, it just so tough
I was honest with you with every word I said
But you just stayed quiet as my tears shed
Why did you put me threw all this pain?
Every time I think of you I just go insane
Night after night I sat in my room, thinking of what I did wrong
Tear after tear would fall for you, I can’t stand being alone for so long
I hate that I feel this way
There’s nothing for me to do nor say
It’s like I’m stuck in this sad love song
But I don’t know where else I belong
I thought it would be easy to let you out of my heart
But I just can’t take it when we are apart
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LaDyD
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2005-02-15 23:12:24]
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Re: untitled
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:23:30 PM AEST
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| It's a great, heartfelt write...I Don't know what else to say... This poem makes me cry...Tanya |
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Re: untitled
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:25:05 PM AEST
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| I'm Sorry, I Really am... TD |
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Re: untitled
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by CurtisC on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:33:02 PM AEST
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I can feel your pain, but ya know sometimes these things happen for a reason...we may not know exactly why but they just do, it takes time but ull feel better :)
curtis |
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Re: untitled
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:44:08 PM AEST
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| Great job. The only name I could think of would be something like "False Feelings" or "Were They Real" or something like that. Keep up the good work |
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Re: untitled
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by Stellar on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:48:29 PM AEST
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the whole thing sounded like a sad love song, so maybe your title could have something to do with that...
like..."another sad love song"
nice write!
take care~Stellar |
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