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The Goldfish
Contributed by
freckle
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:25:39 PM in AEST
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The Goldfish
He wanders all around
his world
Without, it seem,
a care
He plays and frolics
to and fro
And hides most everywhere
He stops moving
for a while
And we wonder if...
He’s dead
Oh no! We smile as...
He swims away
He had only gone...
To bed!
Carol Sossaman
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freckle
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2005-02-15 22:25:39]
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Re: The Goldfish
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 02:59:32 AM AEST
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| This poem put a nice smile on my face.... good write! |
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Re: The Goldfish
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by Socks on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 07:00:37 PM AEST
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*it seem(s) ?
Other than that, I laughed at the "he had only gone to bed" part. Old memories. |
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