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she
Contributed by
thisismesodeal
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:55:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Where did her innocence go?
Does anyone know?
When did she change,
And become so strange?
She’s so out of touch and out of range
She was slowly slipping and I didn’t see
She was dying and I blame me
She was a different person inside
She was trying to hide
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Re: she
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:01:58 PM AEST
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| short and full of meaning. I like it. Great job. |
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Re: she
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:15:40 PM AEST
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said much in a short piece this is the hardest part to deal with we think we know ppl so well then discover that we really dont know them at all
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