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Sisters No More
Contributed by
xXcrossedXx
on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:05:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You woke up to start your day
I woke up to end my life.
You ate pancakes for energy,
I slit my wrists to let some blood free.
You ran upstairs, to get dressed for school.
I grabbed a bunch of blades, anxious for my pool.
You finished with a necklace that wore a silver heart.
I used a silver blade for a jumpstart.
You kissed father, who had gotten a new wife.
And I kissed the butter knife, that would be taking my life.
You grabbed your backpack, and headed out the door.
I pinched my cuts, and watched the blood pour.
You thought I would be here, to greet you after school.
But what you didn’t know, is that I would be laying in my pool.
Down the streets you ran, and off to school you fled.
And once you came back, your sister would be dead.
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xXcrossedXx
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2005-02-15 20:05:53]
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Re: Sisters No More
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:32:50 PM AEST
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Great poem.. I like how you sped up the ending.... Al around great poem....At least you have a Plan...=]
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Re: Sisters No More
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by Compton-tre-block on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:33:25 PM AEST
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YO
I LOVE IT
FINALLY, SOMETHIN I CAN RELATE TO |
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Re: Sisters No More
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by vindicated_loZer on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:19:16 PM AEST
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| I love it. Beautiful poem and awesome title. Keep writing. xx |
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Re: Sisters No More
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:04:50 AM AEST
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Very sad...would you really want your sister to have to come home to that?
Well written. |
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Re: Sisters No More
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:20:09 AM AEST
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serious and essenialy tragic, but i like serious things, u write well, hey, stay around and write some more ok, i'll keep readin . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Sisters No More
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:05:37 PM AEST
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Heartbreaking write...I really hope you don't put your sister though that.
Well written poem. |
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