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To My Valentine
Contributed by
Spell_Weaver
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:06:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A hollow soul, a heavy heart
Watching my world as it fell apart
Tears are falling, wanting to scream
Knowing sides of me you've never seen
Your excuses, your words, your fears and such...
None of them matter, they cannot be touched
But seeing you now, looking at me
I still say beauty is all that I see
Don't do this to me, I begged, I cried
I can only smile if you're by my side
I've fallen in love with love again
What happens when all of my dreaming ends?
Will I know you again like I do?
When I said "Love," I knew it was true
I've never know this sadness before
Beyond my smile, there's so much more
There's a hollow soul, a heavy heart
Watching my world as it fell apart
I can't see you as only my friend
But this is the day when dreams seem to end...
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2005-02-15 19:06:09]
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Re: To My Valentine
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:26:43 PM AEST
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I love this poem! This might be my favorite! This was excellent I loved the form, the words, the flow, it was wonderful. Great Job! Keep it up!
--amanda-- |
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Re: To My Valentine
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:54:38 PM AEST
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| i still read very impressed. |
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Re: To My Valentine
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:00:58 AM AEST
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brilliant write here. such feeling, and i can relate, a
friend of mine has had her heart broken and it tears
me up inside. thx 4 this
diz |
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