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To all the Liars
Contributed by
Taurusgem1
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:14:20 PM in AEST
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Matters not thy sweet love;
For it has been dipped in acid,
And disintegrated upon thy
Thoughtless lips.
Copyright ©
Taurusgem1
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2005-02-15 18:14:20]
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Re: To all the Liars
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:17:39 PM AEST
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| So much said in so little words. Nice job. |
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Re: To all the Liars
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:55:45 PM AEST
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Yes, I love the brevity and the impact.
And, yes, I know at least one of these and wish I didn't.
Stitch |
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Re: To all the Liars
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 02:41:41 AM AEST
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Potent.
Gosh, I wish I could be so concise sometimes. So much.... in eighteen words.
Damn. Impressive.
Well done,
~SNM~ |
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Re: To all the Liars
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by chadbrown on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:52:19 PM AEST
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| A bitter(sweet) write, I enjoyed it. Could have had more length though. |
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Re: To all the Liars
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:31:15 PM AEST
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For a crystal bell
can never be un rung
and though the sound be crystal clear
The sounds reverberate on and on
and the listener will not hear. |
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Re: To all the Liars
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 06:02:23 PM AEST
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some of us have even gone so far as to taste the bitter fruit, only to suffer it's flavor.
excellent piece...thought-provoking
thanks for sharing |
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