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Our Clandestine Love
Contributed by
allforyou
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:23:15 PM in AEST
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You hand me a rose, "This is only the start,"
you say as you place the flower in my hair,
for me red roses are like silent lullabies.
We walk past the mini-mart,
its raining hard and neither of us care,
we're completely drenched, but our spirits are high.
The dinner you made me fell apart,
but everything is in its rightful place,
sitting across from me, you feel what I feel.
The rythmic beating of your heart,
the song formed by every breath you take,
sleeping next to me, somehow this is real.
Dreaming of love and raspberry tarts,
the perfect combination of sweet and sour,
while really we're just laughing in the rain.
Saying goodbye has never been so hard,
especially when we've just had the most wonderful half-an-hour,
walking home from the bus stop on a day so plain.
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2005-02-15 17:23:15]
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Re: Our Clandestine Love
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by zenmind on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:31:49 PM AEST
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I like how you make the "ordinary" extraordinary. I think that life is always like this, in that, every moment, no matter how "ordinary" is beautiful. Everyone should watch "American Beauty" (won best picture 1999, Kevin Spacy, Thora Burch). This movie addresses this issue that there is so much depth in every moment, and we usually are too distracted with our lives to notice it. But when we finally return to the present moment, we see that our life, is this moment, simple, yet profound and deep.
I'm glad that you found someone that you care for. It is always amazing when you find someone who feels the same way about you, that you feel towards them. It is a special connection that is meaningful. It is what we live for------at times.
Be True,
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Re: Our Clandestine Love
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:02:05 PM AEST
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| very nice..like a bird singing on a rainy day.. |
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