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truth
Contributed by
vindicated_lozer
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:03:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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cold is her smile,
and empty is her kiss.
there's something she's not telling you
many words hidden behind her bright lips
deep inside she wants to hurt you
like you have done to her
she wants to rip you apart
piece by piece
because she's dying
because she's alone
and because she CARES
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2005-02-15 16:03:21]
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Re: truth
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by Taurusgem1 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:05:59 PM AEST
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| Very Interesting thoughts behind this. I like it good write. |
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Re: truth
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:13:45 AM AEST
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| describes me perfectly, except more violently. perfect poem. |
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