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Blood
Contributed by
nessa_lee
on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 03:20:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Blood
is what I see.
Blood
is what I feel.
When I'm numb
to the world,
the only thing
that helps me,
is my silver little
friend.
Sure it may
not be right,
but it's the only
thing in sight.
No one else
is here,
no one cares
to see,
I think I'm
going insane
& all this
I can't bare!
It's over!
Copyright ©
nessa_lee
... [
2005-02-15 15:20:23]
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Re: Blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:52:02 PM AEST
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'my silver little friend.'
pretty good...not much form, nice line though...overall good job...
Auryn
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Re: Blood
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:46:17 PM AEST
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Nice style. I really like it. I can totaly relate I once was in your position. If you ever need to talk you can PM me if you want.
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Re: Blood
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:14:58 AM AEST
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| =] nothing not to like. |
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