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Sharp Reality
Contributed by
waos
on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 02:47:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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This is Me.
DARK Insanity,
drugs to heal
AND hide away.
Promises to
B R E A K
shatter all the pain
(or was it all the health)
fall -
ing,
fading
to anonymity.
JUST drop IT.
Medication doctor prescribed
eats a (whole) hole in my soul.
Want to sink back into me
- just to lose -
- miss the hoop -
- drop to the floor -
Fading back to Sharp Reality.
DARK - BREAK - fa -
lling -
drop IT.
Just fill the hole in my aching soul
and soften reality
to cushion me.
Copyright ©
waos
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2005-02-15 14:47:29]
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Re: Sharp Reality
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 02:51:19 PM AEST
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| Good write. |
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Re: Sharp Reality
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:08:14 AM AEST
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| i like this as well. |
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Re: Sharp Reality
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:20:01 PM AEST
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very different, but also very good. i liked how it
was set up and written. Keep up the writing I
will comment on your other poem later.
Bobo (Joel) |
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