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the in's and out's
Contributed by
chazzay_2k5
on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i'll tell u a story it all begins here,
all of my laughter and all of my tear,
you won't understand most of my pain,
but from most of it, it sends me insane,
my childhood was bad,
all through the mum that i had,
at six months old she left me alone,
all alone without a home,
she left me with my nanna and grandad,
and my brother and sister with the dad that i had,
being a baby i didn't know much,
but i still had feelings of a such,
getting older i then moved on,
and realised i wasn't the only one without a mum,
in my eyes my nan is my mum,
and my granddad is my dad,
they've loved me all this time,
even when i've made them mad.
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2005-02-15 12:12:54]
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Re: the in's and out's
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:15:06 PM AEST
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| It's sounds straight from the heart. I love it. |
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Re: the in's and out's
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:09:26 PM AEST
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I had grandparents who loved me like that, too. I'm happy for you.
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Re: the in's and out's
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:30:34 AM AEST
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| Sounds like things were tough for you, but you ended up pulling through with the love of your grandparents. Sweet write. |
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