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I'm Going to make you proud, Mom
Contributed by
xXcrossedXx
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:35:30 AM in AEST
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I知 going to make you proud Mom,
I am.
I知 going to make up for my mistakes Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to be the best I can Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to raise my grades Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to get a good job Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to wait until marriage Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to raise my kids well Mom,
Just watch.
I知 going to show you I love you Mom,
I will.
I知 going to show you I知 sorry Mom,
You値l see.
I知 going to make you proud Mom,
Just watch.
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xXcrossedXx
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Re: I'm Going to make you proud, Mom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:53:47 AM AEST (User
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This is a GREAT poem! It has everything---it comes from deep inside and it flows with energy and excitement. I hope you do make her proud. It would be a great feeling, woudn't it?
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Re: I'm Going to make you proud, Mom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:08:23 PM AEST (User
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Wow. This is an excellent poem. And it's kind of how I feel. I want to make my Mom proud to. Haha. I don't know if I could. But anyways excellent poem!
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Re: I'm Going to make you proud, Mom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:09:02 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful write! You'll make her proud by doing something great for yourself that makes YOU proud. :-)
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