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A Poor Girl's Valentine
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:47:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If I had money
Enough to spend
I'd buy you anything
Because you've been that good of friend
If I could spend a day with you
Our company eachother
I'd do it without hesitation
Because you've been that good of "brother"
But now I'd like to give you something more
Take my hearat out from under cover
I'd like to give it all to you
Because you've been that good of lover
It seems our feelings have evolved
Who knows what we'll have to weather
But there's one thing I can promise you
No matter what, I'll love you forever
And even if we later decide
We can't make it to the end
I'll still go on loving you
Even if only as a friend
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2005-02-15 00:47:04]
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 02:00:06 AM AEST
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VERY BEAUTIFUL KIE, YOUR HEART IS TRUE, A SWEET POEM . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 03:36:48 AM AEST
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what a kind and beautiful write.
well done. |
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:50:14 AM AEST
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yes very beautiful, you have a good heart
pix xx |
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:12:19 AM AEST
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Kie this was such a beautiful write, your such a nice person to write this special poem. Nice write hun.
Jane xxx |
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 12:54:54 PM AEST
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Beautiful such kind words from the heart
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by Rylo on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:11:46 PM AEST
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| That was really beautiful, and sometime's love is worth so much more then anything else. Awesome job. |
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:19:03 PM AEST
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Hi Kiela,
Sweetie that poem was really sweet. I like how the words flowed very well. I'm glad I clicked on your name. Off to read more of your poem's. I enjoy them so far.
Keep Writing
W/Luv 4 Lyfe,
Care |
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:06:57 AM AEST
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| very beautiful valentine.. you sure have a nice heart.. nice knowing you kie kie... love your poetry hate that you have been in pain to have to write it tho... |
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Re: A Poor Girl's Valentine
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:23:02 PM AEST
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| This was a very sweet write! I loved the flow...you have a nice way with words. Keep it up... Tanya |
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