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Ode to a Vampire
Contributed by
bigtig6269
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:34:15 AM in AEST
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He comes through like a shadow in the night, but it’s not Darkwing Duck
If he catches you and gets to your neck, you’re completely out of luck
So silent and sleek like a tiger looking for prey
Oh it must be so great to live life this way
Sleep all day and stay up all night
Sounds like what I want my life to be like
Live for eternity, little worry about death
I would really enjoy the lack of garlic breath
Some people question if they really exist
Are they real or just one big myth
I know one person who thought they were just jokes
But he started believing when on his neck he felt two pokes
Suddenly everything turned quiet, no one around
No one to hear his scream as he twitched on the ground
Now he runs his life wild and free
I know all of this because that person was me.
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bigtig6269
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by TheRaven on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:48:17 AM AEST
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what a very cool poem. damn i really enjoied this. great job, especially with the rhyme.
i also like vampires, and i'm actually finishing up bram stoker's dracula right now. keep up the great writing...
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:48:30 AM AEST
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a nightwalker I love it!! Ill be watching for more
Michelle |
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:51:31 AM AEST
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| You should check out my piece called "The Most Dangerous Place". I think you will enjoy it too. |
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 03:34:57 AM AEST
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very interesting to read.I too love reading and writing vampire poem.
well done. |
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:50:41 AM AEST
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very intresting and dark, an enjoyable vampire read
pix xx |
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by mysonnet on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:20:23 AM AEST
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hiyas.
it's dark. but it's kinda humorous too. gr8 poem u've got (: |
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by Solmyr1404 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 02:24:29 AM AEST
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| dude....that is whacked out!!!!....sounds like something i wrote when i got drunk....jk....i like it.... |
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by LaDyD on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:49:00 PM AEST
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| That was an awesome poem...i like the ending and thanx for the suggestions on my poem...=) |
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by skadmatrix on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 02:07:52 AM AEST
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| i liked it, it was vary entertaining lol, good job though |
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Re: Ode to a Vampire
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 11:03:55 PM AEST
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| very funny and not really dark but still lovely |
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