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Broken Wings
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:20:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Say
Hello to My Fallen Angel
With Broken Wings
For
She is the only one
That can bring me up
In my times of need
Even
Though she can not fly
Her voice sings
For
She is the only one
That can make me
Open my eyes and take heed
Even
Though she can not fly
Her smile gleams
For
She is the only one
That can bring me up
Higher then my highest dreams
Even
With
...
Broken
Wings
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-15 00:20:33]
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Re: Broken Wings
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by Amaterian_Angel on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:59:19 AM AEST
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| Good use of repetition... BEAUTIFUL!!! |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:55:08 AM AEST
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| wow, this is beautiful.. well done |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 02:40:43 PM AEST
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| I really liked this a lot..a lot. |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by heartbroken4ever on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:12:13 PM AEST
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Clark your amazing and
i love you.Your my only hope
love
amber |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by Onslaught on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:30:32 PM AEST
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Very Nice Clark, Very Beautiful and moving.
I'm in much the same situation now as well, but if only my wonderful special angel would open her arms to me again.
You are very lucky to know and be loved by someone such as Amber, I think you're gonna have to do something about that nickname of yours, because I believe that things are going to be alright for you two.
Never stop loving each other, for my sake, and for the sake of the world, never let love go. Peace to you and everyone you know and meet. |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:27:54 PM AEST
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| you need not wings to fly, you need will. excellent. im still waiting on a bad poem from you, lol. |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by Onslaught on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:44:44 PM AEST
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| Well essentially9 you are right, but I think Redbull will work as well. REDBULL GIVES YOU WINGS!!! |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:32:58 PM AEST
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Clark this is by far one of my favorite poems this was excellent! Wonderful Great job, really, this was outstounding!
ly
--amanda-- |
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