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UNITY IS WHAT WE WANT TO LAST
Contributed by
jmakuer
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:50:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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AM YOUR LONELY LAND
NO ONE IN THIS UNIVERSE UNDERSTAND
WHY ARE THEY CHASING AWAY MY PEOPLE
LORD WOULD YOU PLEASE TELL WHY
EACH AND EVERYDAY PASSES BY
AND ALL I SEE IS ANOTHER FAMILY CRY
WOULD SOME ONE PLEASE TELL ME WHY
I GO THROUGH TOUGH TIMES EACH AND EVERY YEAR
BUT WHAT I SEE IS ANOTHER KID IS SHEDDING TEARS
AND EVERYBODY IS FILLED WITH NOTHING BUT SO MUCH FEAR
FEAR OF LOOSING ANOTHER FAMILY MEMBER
WHICH COULD BE COUSIN, BROTHER, SISTER, OR EVEN FATHER
AND THEN THEY BE LEFT WITH THEIR HEART TORN
THIS WAR HAS BEEN GOIN ON FOR EVER
I HOPE IT WILL BE THE END TO
HAVE ALL OF YOU TOGETHER
SO LET'S GIVE A GOOD PRAYER
TO THE LORD WHO WILL BRING PEACE AND JOY
TO HIM WHO WILL BRING THE MOTHERS THEIR BOYS
LORD FORGIVE ME FOR I AM INSANE
I JUST WANTED EVERYBODY TO BE THE SAME
HATE IS WHAT WE HAD IN THE PAST
BUT UNITY IS WHAT WE WANT TO LAST
Copyright ©
jmakuer
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2005-02-14 23:50:26]
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Re: UNITY IS WHAT WE WANT TO LAST
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:47:53 AM AEST
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| AMEN & AMEN. I hope you will read my poem, "War No More," under political poetry. |
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Re: UNITY IS WHAT WE WANT TO LAST
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by wakegurl77 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:17:24 PM AEST
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the rimes sound a little forced but i like the idea of the poem just so you know a poem doesnt necisarlly have to follow a rhyme scheme to be good
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