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your shining soul
Contributed by
jmakuer
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:27:21 PM in AEST
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god looked down on you and felt your pain
he glanced again and saw your loving face
so he called upon you to go to his place
a place where you will rejoice once again
a place where you will be filled with smile
a place where god will always be by your side
i looked at you sleeping so calm
not worrying about your past
now you are gone but left us memories
that will live in us and last
his angels rejoice as you come to sight
for your soul is a glittering diamond
shining so bright
this poem is dedicated to a friend a hero and a brother...aka alier kang.... writen by john makuer best friend...
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jmakuer
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2005-02-14 23:27:21]
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Re: your shining soul
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:40:01 PM AEST
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Very deep post...Great job....
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Re: your shining soul
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by sojourner on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:41:01 PM AEST
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beautifully written poem,I can relate, I to lost some one near to me,my twin sister back in june of this year.
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Re: your shining soul
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:44:30 PM AEST
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Great tribute to you friend...
Hugs
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