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New Hope
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:27:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't let this Lost Hope
Bring me down
Because there is someone new to help me cope
Someone previously unfound
Now I'm not in a mope
And I love it when shes around
Its not like I'm walking on a tightrope
But hell..I am spellbound
She is more of a New Hope
For my previously crowned
Lost Hope that now
Wont
Ever again
Bring me down
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-14 23:27:15]
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Re: New Hope
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by UnfallenTears on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:42:41 PM AEST
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| I like this... I think it's great you've got someone to bring you up. |
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Re: New Hope
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:45:14 PM AEST
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| =] this was excellent clark. hope such a fickle thing, though i dont want to bring you down. im so excited about a poem i just wrote, i know youll like it, youd be the only one, its about what we talk about involving the site. =] |
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Re: New Hope
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by jmakuer on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:54:14 PM AEST
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| THAT WAS GREAT YOU DID A 1NDERFUL JOB THERE BODY...KEEP IT UP |
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Re: New Hope
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by heartbroken4ever on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:10:29 PM AEST
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This is beautiful clark
your the greatest
i love you
Love
Amber |
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Re: New Hope
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:34:48 PM AEST
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beautiful, very sweet. Nice write clark.
ly
--amanda-- |
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