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remembering mom
Contributed by
sojourner
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:17:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Pray tell-
what comfort is there in death
to thoese left behind to weep
In a twilight state I see thee
only as in sleep
My God! arise
so that I may once again, see you smile
To hold you once again
to feel the warmth,of a mothers touch
I loved you oh so much
I'm sorry now,for things that I have said
and did not say
I weep now, within my heart
for you have gone away
but yet,
a smile does come, now and then
to brighten my day
Remembering! remembering when
I was but a little kid
and you were my everything
for you were my mom
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Re: remembering mom
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by jmakuer on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:58:49 PM AEST
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| THAT IS SO SWEET, I COULD RELATE TO THAT, I LOST MY DAD AND I WAS JUST A KID BUT NOW I REGRET BECAUSE I WOULD HAVE BEEN OFF BETTER IF HE WAS HERE.. |
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Re: remembering mom
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:44:03 AM AEST
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| Sweet and heartfelt write. I bet she would have been proud to read it. This poem makes readers appreciate what they have. Great work. |
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Re: remembering mom
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:08:43 AM AEST
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It brings me tears..I know how much sorrowful to lose one's own mother..
Few months ago I lost my parents.venkat |
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