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st. valentine's dream
Contributed by
electrique_poet
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:47:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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small town asphalt
itching to burn
impaled hearts
with little concern
(callow haircuts, shallow blonde sluts)
every boy's gauche approach
conjures up the sex of reproach
(cursory affection of a beguiling nature)
lascivious in tender ways;
the careless cast of the asinine play,
titled most appropriatly st. valentine's day
(massacre)
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Re: st. valentine's dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenmind on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:34:07 PM AEST (User
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I am really amazed at how much you can express in so few words. i totally enjoyed the preface part. ".....don't enjoy" that made me laugh :) You impress me. And the reason why you impress me is because you seem to strike a chorde within me, that I have not yet been able to define. It's very hard to explain. But the impression I get from you is that you have a very meticulous, control over what you are expressing, you are very in touch with yourself.....or I might be wrong...I don't know you, but......(it's no use) what I am trying to say, I have no words for....but I want you to know, that I recognize it.
Be True,
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