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I Can’t Believe It
Contributed by
perfection
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:27:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Graduation day and I’m in tears,
I’m wearing his class ring.
A moment of silence to remember,
I wish that he were here.
I was always scared he would die,
He promised he would quit.
But I never pressured him,
And he never stopped.
That one say and night,
I remember it so clearly.
The phone call that I got,
They said he had an accident.
He took too many pills,
Smoked too much pot,
Drank too many beers,
And then decided to drive.
On his way to pick me up,
He promised to be careful.
“I love you” last thing I heard him say,
I couldn’t wait to see him.
I cried for so many months.
I can’t believe he’s really gone.
I will join him up above someday,
For now I hope he is watching me.
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Re: I Can’t Believe It
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:35:29 PM AEST
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| a piece to be proud of. |
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Re: I Can’t Believe It
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:47:28 AM AEST
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| very good piece. Reminds me of a few of my friends on graduation day. Very emotional. Keep up the good work |
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Re: I Can’t Believe It
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by Taurusgem1 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:49:32 PM AEST
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| It is so hard to lose the one you loved... I hope one day you will love again.. Great emotion in this write. |
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