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Try
Contributed by
Evilnn
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:16:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Try to survive
Try to stay sane
Try to get high
To take away the pain
Copyright ©
Evilnn
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2005-02-14 22:16:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Try
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:29:11 PM AEST (User
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too redundant. bad format and broken in fact. not very good substance wise either. this is short and to the point, but holds no power or emotion. the only good thing to take away from this is that you know how to at least spell words ranging from two to five letters in length. seems like hardly anyone can even manage that feat anymore. its ridiculus. im glad you did not short cut your letters either. |
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Re: Try
(User Rating: 1 ) by electrique_poet on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:56:48 PM AEST (User
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well, i wont be such an articulate ass, and i will say youve done well capturing a feeling, or moment, that you cant say much about, its almost more a reminder... all we can ever do is try
... in words electrique |
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