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Unsure feelings
Contributed by
HiDdEnTEARS
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:59:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I realized something today,
It opened up my eyes,
All the feelings I had felt,
just turned into lies.
I guess I never realized,
While waiting for so long,
that while I was looking for happiness,
something went all wrong.
The person that I thought,
Had to key to my lonely heart,
I realized was not the one for me,
As we slowly drift apart.
So as my feelings for someone else grow stronger,
And from the other they grow apart,
I realized maybe I was looking in the wrong direction,
From the very start.
Copyright ©
HiDdEnTEARS
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2005-02-14 20:59:42]
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Re: Unsure feelings
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by Kyarn on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:06:29 PM AEST
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I know how that feels. Nice Job.
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Re: Unsure feelings
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by sojourner on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:59:21 PM AEST
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very good write,thats the nice thing about poetry,you can vent your feelings in a poem
for all to see, for we have all lived your words one time or another in our lives.
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