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Love is Confusing
Contributed by
saveMEfromMYSELF
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I’ve known you since before I can remember
We were small children then
I cannot think of the last time we spoke
It must have been forever when
You ate cookies at my house
And we peed in the neighbor’s pool
We lost track of time,
And forgot about school
But now I find you here
On my porch, outside my home
And I find myself heart broken
You were my first love, but I found another
My feelings come back
One step at a time
Your presence makes me weak
And your voice makes me cry
Your eyes are impenetrable
And your touch just too soft
But I have someone else
Whose name I can’t think of
Why did you have to come back?
You’ve confused me beyond the limits
Now I’m stuck in this lie
Thank you friend of mine
My heart sings when you’re near
But my hand just want’s to punch you
I know that it’s right, even though it’s wrong
Why do I have to love you?
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Re: Love is Confusing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:59:32 PM AEST
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| This is very sweet. I especially loved the ending. Beautiful work. |
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Re: Love is Confusing
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by jonbalser on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:28:25 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem i mean it happens to more ppl then what you think, like myself, i love my ex who i have a daughter with, but my frist love has came back to me, and i don't know for sure who i want to work things out with |
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Re: Love is Confusing
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by LaDyD on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:35:34 PM AEST
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| This was a beautiful poem....it sucks when an old love comes back...=/ |
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Re: Love is Confusing
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by CurtisC on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:09:18 PM AEST
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in that very situation right now, well kinda..started talking with my first and only real love again recently and it's pretty crazy :)
beautiful write though, i loved reading it :)
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Re: Love is Confusing
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by malinsinbigler on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 09:13:41 PM AEST
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| I love the flow of this poem, very good work |
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