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Hard To Say
Contributed by
stalkee
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:28:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Shut my mouth and open me up wide
Let these feelings rush out to the world
My life has changed, I'm not the same
And I don't mean to hide it
All those feelings that overwhelm me
when I see you walk by
They take me and tear me away
from all the pain of life
My words are like water in my lungs
I choke on them rather than let them out
My hearts on fire and so inspired
And I don't mean to hide it
'Cause feelings mean nothing if never expressed
And all those feelings that overwhelm me
when I see you walk by
They take me and tear me away
from all the pain of life
I've been on top of the world
running in circles all day
And when you're on my mind
I have the time of my life
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stalkee
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2005-02-14 19:28:49]
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Re: Hard To Say
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by freckle on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:44:21 PM AEST
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| Very sweet poem. I love the 'words are like water' line. |
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Re: Hard To Say
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:46:33 PM AEST
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"I've been on top of the world
running in circles all day"
I like that.
Good ideas, keep writing.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Hard To Say
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by noone on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:47:47 PM AEST
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This is a great write...your emotions are clearly portrayed. Effective repetition. Well done!! Please post more.
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Re: Hard To Say
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by faffeee on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:33:15 PM AEST
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:) i love it, i love it *cries*
"And when you're on my mind
I have the time of my life"
> a very interesting, true observation, perfectly said...well done, katie xx |
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Re: Hard To Say
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:01:14 PM AEST
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| oh, very nice stalkee. =] |
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